Sunday, 18 June 2017

aa roju......

vammo appude 11 ayyindi ga anukuntu baaranga kallu therichaanu. kallu inka baruvu gaane unnayi. ninnati godava affect mari.

thanu matram ennallani opika padathaaru edo idharam koncham educated forward thinking families nunchi vacham kabatti ee matram workout ayyindi.thanaki engagement naade cheppanu nenu chala indivudual ani, naku  respect ivvagaligithene manaku set authundi ani.
edo conditions pettinatlu kaadu gaani prathi manishiki konni values opinions undaali and relationship sustain avvalante mutual respect avasaramani baavinche abhyudaya bhaavalu anna pedha maatalu cheppanu  kaani oka sagatu ammayini.

ammayilaki eppati nuncho ive baavalu unna cheppe swecha ledhemo ani nammuthanu nenu. maa ammano ammamano velli "yemma meeku kavalsina bartha ni nuvve choose chesuko" ani unte, eppudu pelli chesukovaale nuvve nirnayinchukune avakaasam unte vaadukune vallu kaadhaa ani aduguthe kachithanga aunu ane samadhanam cheptharu. nijjam andi nannu nammandi oka ammayi manasu inko ammayike thelusthadi.

inthaki nenu thanani adigina vishayam ento, enduku godava jarigindo cheppane ledu kadu.okarinokaru artham chesukunentha varaku idhari madya XYZ undakudadhu ani. manasulu kalavakunda kalisthe naaku wife anna feeling raadani cheppa thanatho.

thanu kuda chala reasonable korika anukunnadu. anduke marriage ayyi 1 month ayina nannu eppudu force cheyaledu,. kaani ninna nenu maree mondiga answer chesa anipinchindemo chala gattiga arichaadu

nenu vere udhesam tho chesthunna anipinchi untadi thanaki. lekunte asalu ee nela rojullo eppudu ala aravaledu. kaani em cheyanu nela rojulaina naku ee place, ee environment, ee being jobless edi nachatledu. set avvalekapothunna. inka cheppalante jet lag kuda inka poledhane cheppali. yes, nenu france ki vachi 1 month ayyindi. India lo job friends family my dog my garden my favourite biriyani roju edo excitement undedhi kaani ikkada full bore. ekkadiki vellali anna thanu undaalsindhe. IIMA grad kada chala high pay, ikkada anni baane unnayi chala pedha individual villa, bullet proof walls, sophisticated house interiors, maid etc ila anni baane unnayi but cheppanu ga independent to dependent ga inka adjust avvalekapothunna and thanaki ekkuva time ledu naatho spend cheyadaaniki so naku baga time padthondi.

sorry ani watsapp cheddama, vadhu le direct ga lunch prepare chesi office ki velli idham thana fav saree lo debbaki flat ayyipothaaru ani thana thoughts ki break vesi washroom ki vellindi. 
phataphat snanam chesi, wardrobe lo normal night ware theesi vesukundi, velle mundhu ready audham ani. kitchen ki velli fridge open chesindi "abha vegatables lopaliki thechinatlu ledu sanjay " anukuni door daggariki vellindi. france lo anni online order ivvadame daily morning fresh vegetables door deliver authaayi. " arey keys ekkada petta" anukuntu keys kosam atu itu chusindi. abbaa  evee okka chota pettanu ga ani thananu thanu thikkutuntu vethukuthune undi.

uhuu labham ledhu surprise ledu bongu ledu thanaki call chesi adagalsindhe anukundhi.
sanjay chala systematic and specially cleanliness freak. oka pulla theesi vere chota pettina thanaki thelisipodhi malli adi correct place lo pette varaku nidrapodu anuko.
kopanga untaadu ela adagalo. fridge lo unna vaatithone cooking chesina ofice ki vellalante kavali ga keys anukuntu bed room ki vellindi.
phone unte ga, adi ekkada padesaano ippudu abhaa antu usoorumandi. flashback lo nyt ekkada pettana ani alochinchindi. thanaki baaga gurthu roju laage bed pakkana unna table paina pettindi. alarm 7am ki set chesi daily akakde pedthadi. kaani akakda ledu. thanaku enduko gundalo oka bayam start ayyindi. ikkade undaali kachithanga, kinda padindha ani vethikindi. ledu. ekkada petta. godava paddappudu ekkadaina visiraana ledhe. last evariki call chesa? intlo vallake adi party mundhu. party tharavatha late authadi ani party mundhe matlaaadesa.

ekkada poyindi, thanaki enduko normal ga anipinchatle. so living room lo unna landline nunchi missed call idham ani vellindi. phone dead ayyindi, anthe thana mind blank ayyindi. what is this keys levu, cell kanipinchatle, landline dead ayyindi, all this cant be coincidence.

ninna thana matalu takkuna strike ayayyi , aunu le room lo lock chesi himsinche abhayilane nammauthaaru naala soft ga artham chesukune abhayilante lokuve mee ammayilaki cheptha neeku cheptha. edo kopamlo plus thaagina mathulo ala matlaaduthunnadanukunna kaani nijjanage chesthadanukoledu.

cha cha ala em ayyundadhu, edo coincidence ye ayyuntadi. thanani 1 month ga chusthunna alanti vaaru kaadu ani thanaki thaane console chesukundi.

saketha focus, just focus. mobile ekkada pettavo alochinchu, last call, last message. eppudu eppudu. after party call chesava? cheyakunte party lo marchipoyi untaav, think think. ledu chesa vegetables order mobile app tho ne chesa adi car lo unnappude chesa return vasthundaga. so party lo miss avvale then where next car lo vadilesaana, ...
ledu ledu temperature chala challanga unte varsham vasthunda ikkada roads block ayithe thanu office ki vellaledu so check cheyamante chesa adi room lo enter authundanga naku baga gurthu. appude oka merupu kuda vachindi. lopaliki vasthe illu sound proof kada em vinalem ani kuda anukunna. so intiki thecha definite ga thecha. mari ekkada poyindi.

oka vela nijjanagne nannu house arrest chesunte thanu battalu theesukelli undaali ga, aa thought vachindo ledo paruguna bed room loki velli already therichi unna wardrobe ni chusa. gunde jallu mandi yes thana battalu konne unnayi.

shit, ayyipoyindi anukunnandantha jarigindi thanu nannu house arrest chesi vellipoyadu.   
OMG ippudu ela. cha asalu tension ki kallu chethulu vanukuthunnayi.

intha lo bell ring ayyindi. abha edo dhairyam vachindi adrushtam thalupu thaduthundi annatlu parugulu theesa. yes maa maid ayyuntadi. thanu vache time ye. yes, idi ela miss ayyadu sanjay. maid dagagra duplicate key kuda undi memu lenappudu kuda vachi wash chesi velthuntadi. naa santhosham aapukolekapoya. thannu nenu velleppatike 3 times ring chesindi. duplex kada raavadaniki time pattinidi.

nenu aa key hole vaipu aashaga chusthunna, thanu key pedathadhani.
ledu pettatle, shittt thanu key marchipoyindhemo, nenu silent ga unte evaru lerani vellipodhi ga ventane door knock chesaanu. thana voice naku vinipinchatledu ayyo ippudu em cheyali. ee roju thanu vellipothe, sanjay ki ee vishayam strike ayithe ee option kuda lekunda chestharu . no no ee avakashanni vadulukokudadhu should do something bt em chedam ela.

paper lo raasi kinda slight gap undi andulo pedadham anukundi. kaani maid ki english matladame kaani chadavadam raadu. ippudu ela? ekkuva time kuda ledu. matlaadaniki language kavali kaani express cheyadaniki language avasaram ledu. appude thanaki idea thattindi red ink pen tho danger anna picture symbolic ga raasi door lo nunchi bayatiki pampindi.

pampi door gattiga baadhuthune undi.kaani appatike maid vellipoyinatlundi. ayina thanu pattu vadalakunda evaro okaraina chustharu ga annatlu chala paers raasi bayatiki visiri vesthu undi.

ika aa nissahayathaku edupu vachesindi thanaki. thana kalla nellatho thanu geesina danger symbol cherigindi.
no saketha no, nuvvem palleturi nunchi raaledu, IIT lo chadivav. Come on dhairyam thechuko focus focus edo idea raakapodhu anukuntu thanaki thane dhairyam cheppukundi. laptop yes laptop , malli bedroom ki parugulu theesindi. laptop matram enduku unchuntaadu theesukellipoyuntaademo. ayina try chedam ani doubtful gane vellindi.

yes undi, adhenti nenu anavasaranag thanani anumaaninchaanemo, lap enduku pettesi velthadu ani santhoshantho naa moham veligipoyindi. lap on chesi password type chesa, incorrect passowrd password change today morning 6:30am ani alert vachindi. naa manasu malli pathalamloki jaarinatlaindi.
intha plan ela  cheyagaligaadu okka ratri lo, asalu nidrapoyundademo. thanu IITm lo btech chesthunnappudu ammayila accounts ni ela hack chesevaado, ela chala private messages chadivevaado anni okatokati gurthu vasthunnayi. chala intelligent ani murisipoyaa ippudu aa thelivi antha ikkade upayoginchaadu ga.

no no i will not let him win, i wil not. oka avaerage person annam thinakunda x days water thaagakunda y days brathakagaladu anta. ippatike nenu lechi 4hrs ye ga yyinid. np np em kaadu nenu bayatapadutha elaagaina ani mali dhairyam nooriposukundi. 4hrs ayyindi anukuntu wall clock chusindi. 3pm. daily sanjay naku call chese time, lunch tharavatha ventane meeting untadi thanaki meeting ayina ventane call chesevaadu daily marchipokunda.

cha, inka sex ye na sex lekunte wife wife kaada. inni rojulu dhaani kosame natinchaademo. ika nneu mondi ga unnannai asalu character bayatapettinatlunnadu. endaro ammayilu naa lage mosa poyuntaaru ga. ledu, nenu alanti oka ammayini kaadu naku vachina kashtaanni nene solve chesukuntaa.  i wil nt be  a loser.
cinemallo ilanti situations lo edche ladies ni chusi enni sarlu thittukuni untaano, em cheyalo alochinchaakunda edisthe panulu jaruguthaaya, evaraina vachi help chesthenena self ga help chesukolera ani enni matalu anedhanni. "where there is a will there is a way" these ladies are sick anukunedhanni. "where there is a will theer is a way" yes way . way undi terrace paiki. yes yes terrace opening ki oka door untadi aa door eppuud lock chese untadi.

ayina aa key untado ledho, entha IIM ayina hadavidiga chesetappuud edo okati vadilese untaadu proffessional criminal kaadu kada anukuntu door daggariki vellindi. hammayya anukundi. key petti door theesthondi . entha laaguthunna raavatle. chaala try chesindi kudarale, bayata nunchi vesinatlu anipinchindi. ee dhari kuda musukundhi anukundi.

akkade koolabdindhi. morning nunchi em thinaledhemo kada asalu energy ravatledu. neraalu goralu lo chusina anni cases ala mind mundhu parigeduthunnayi. vaati lonchi evaina clues vasthaayemo ani vethukuthondi. entra babu naa situation ani thala paiki ethindi.

eureka mind lo edo light veligindi, paina unna smoke sensor chusindi. asalu ee ille burn cheyali annatha kopam undi thanaki, kitchen lo velli stove on chesi, oka clothe ni veliginchi pattukodhamani kindaki vachindi. bt appude thanaki strike ayyindi, arey power cut time kada 3pm-5pm sensor emo pani cheyadu. ayina parle after 5 pm hope undi kada anukundhi.

ayina kudutugaa kurchovaalani ledu. 2 hrs tharavatha adi kuda pani cheyakapothe, cnt take chances. mind is racing now. edo oka way out undaali, firts ee bloody thoughts mothaanni flush cheyali anukundhi. flush ante gurthu vachindi washroom lo , guest rom washroom lo exhaust fan bayatiki face chesi untadi. so akkada nunchi aristhe evaro okaru vasthaaru.  thought vachindhe alasyam phataa phat akkadiki veli exhaust fan bokkalonchi bayatiki chusthondi. commode paiki ekki bayatiki asha ga chusthondi. evaraina kanipisthe bagunnu ani.akkada washing machine on ayyi undadam gamaninchindi. ee washroom asalu gen ga vaadane vaadam kada ani open chesi chusindi. andulo wardrobe lo miss ayyayi anukunna sanjay battalu unnayi

wat is happenning  confused ga undi. door open ayyinatlu anipinchindi. chusthe sanjay with a bookey and dominos cover. thanaki em artham kaaledhu. pata pata nellu kaaraayi oka udhutuna thanani hug chesukundhi. entha bayapaddanno annadi.

asalu emaindo artham kaani sanjay first thanani calm down chesi, kuchobettadu. emaindi ra emaindi cool ga cheppu ipppudu annadu. aunu wardrobe loni battalu enduku washing machine lo vesaav. adha nuvvu edo sketch box pettinatlunnav, adi leak ayyi chala battalaku antindi morning kanipisthe first wash chesi chudama nnatlu andulo padesi vella. laptop passwprd enduku change chesaav, arey adhemundi every month new passowrd set chesukomani adugudhi ga ee rojuki one month ayyindi, mari land phone pani cheyatle ninna varsham padindhi ga anduke cut ayyuntadi, asalu land line enduku vaadav nee mobile edi? ani adigaadu. nneu adagaalsindi nuvvu aduguthunnav enti annadi thanu. ekkada poyuntadi. let me try ani call chesadu thana mobile nunchi. switch off ani vasthondi. ekkadabha , aa ippuud gurthu vasthondi ninna nenu vesukunna jeans lone undi untadi. adha adi nenu washing machine lo padesa ga annadu!!!

idharam navvukunnam. thanani gattiga pattukuni dnt ever leave me alone ani hug chesukunna. aunu inthaki password enti ani adiga, "my love im sorry" is the password annadu. inka anthe aa hug inka gattipadindhi!!!!

3 comments:

  1. Manchi suspense thriller la vundi☺️Good work saki

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  2. Thanks Sravs, for reading such a long one:) Happy that you liked it!!

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  3. Really. Oka thriller movie chustunatu unde. Out of mind situations. Chala baga screenplay undi.

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